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Enegene Namrae

THE GAEIZAANS

It's obvious early on in the novel that Luapp and Enegene knew each other before they met on Pedanta. Both refer to the fact that he arrested her and she spent six months in jail.

 

She wrongly assumed he had recommended she serve the full six months for a first offence and harboured a grudge against him. However, sometime after being released, she discovered the truth of the matter and her attitude changes.

 

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      I assume I've done what every author does. I base my characters on people I've known, with changes. Enegene was based on my late mother. She had a great sense of humour and a firey temper that would flare up and just as quickly cool down when anything annoyed her. My mother was the last surviver of fourteen children, a survior of WW2 and someone who loved my dad enough to follow him around the world. She also had enough gumption to get herself , me and my sister, and all our luggage, onto a bus to a train station, by train to the docks and onto a refurbished battleship to go out to Sri Lanka in the early nineteen fifties to meet my dad. That explained, onto Enegene.

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     Enegene would seem an odd choice of assistant for Luapp in this mission, and she asks the question why he chose her. She has her theories, but his answer surprises her. Despite her suspicion of his motives, she mostly acts as a professional and they generally get along. However, Luapp's responce to one of her outbursts of; "Talking to guardians is so much easier," is very heartfelt.

 

    Enegene's nature is on display as soon as she appears in the novel. She appears vindictive, giving Luapp an unsettling couple of hours thinking things have gone wrong. She even says, "a small payback for past encounters".

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      While she's playing a part, her sneered remarks about the guardian's appearance seems to add to the misconception, but in reality she's shocked. Her naivety about what he would look like after being a slave for three months is made clear in her thoughts. Added to this is her confusion  about her emotional state on seeing him like that. Throughout the novel, Enegene is conflicted between her anger of what happened leading to her arrest and serving time, and her feelings for the guardian.

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     Despite her tough life growing up in the Swamplands, and being sucked into the criminality of the place, Enegene has a strong sense of right and wrong. She also has a strong sense of loyalty. Swamplanders always supported Swamplanders, or so she thought. When she found out it was a Swamplander who tipped off the guardians about where they were, she was incensed. It changed her outlook from Swamplanders always being hounded by guardians and guardians always being the oppressors, to something more balanced.

 

     Luapp helped that change when he arrested and interviewed her.  She says she was terrified when placed in the because of the rumours she'd heard about what guardians might do to her. The fact that nothing happened apart from being charged with obstruction was a great relief. The relief quickly wore off when she was sentenced to the whole six months for obstruction. She blamed Luapp for that, and became very sullen and vitriolic whenever he visited to assess her educational improvement.

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      The fact that he suggested she became a Spyrian in a backhanded way when annoyed, and then supported her efforts to become one wasn't lost on her. She had her suspicions about why he would do that, until she found out the truth about her arrest, and subsequent serving the full sentence.

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       Enegene like most people is a being of mixed emotions. Her normal nature is sincere with mischievous undertones. While she isn't immature in her outlook, she sometimes portrays herself that way as she knows it irritates Luapp. However, due to her experiences in the swamps, she is sometimes quick to accuse and even quicker to produce the knife strapped to her wrist. Even though she was furious with the guardians arriving and Luapp arresting her, she respected him for "taking her knife without getting sliced", and she admits that pulling her knife on a guardian wasn't the most intelligent thing she'd ever done.

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      As the novel progresses, Enegene's respect for Luapp grows. When he uses his "talents", their words for mind power such as telepathy, telekinesis and teleportation she is surprised at his ability. He also scares her when she infuriates him to the point where he grabs her. She likens the resulting contact as if being connected

to a low power source, and she was in no doubt it was only a fraction of what he was capable of.

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Luapp Nostowe

Unlike Enegene who is 90% based on my mother, Luapp is based on a group of men from my family, including my late father. Luapp has the same seemingly unending patience as my dad, until something really upsets him, then like the red head he is, Luapp explodes. But even then it's not in an uncontrolled fashion. When Enegene dosed him with the drug he was angry, but it was a controlled anger. If he'd lost it he could have seriously injured or even killed her. Instead, he did just enough to make sure she didn't do it again, then he took his fury out on a tree stump. He's just as careful with the language he uses.

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    He has a quick wit and amusing turn of phrase, although it's not portrayed in this novel apart from the quip that having a script machine in a cooler drawer  put's a new slant on contacting the deceased. As this was the one and only time he responed like that, it made Enegene nervous.

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     Very little is really learned about Luapp during this novel except that he takes his job seriously. When on a mission, there is no room for frivilous behaviour. It's explained that he's a Grey Guardian, colloquially known on Gaeiza as Shadowmen. It's the equivalent of MI5 in Britain; internal security within the Seven Systems. He states that his mother died when he was very young, and he has few memories of her. Added to that he mentions that his father never married again.

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      To Enegene he's a mystery, diverging very little about himself, which makes her curious. To add fuel to the fire, his best friend, Green Commander Ekym Yetok refuses to tell her anything about him. She has her suspicions  he's in a serious relationship or even married. She changes her mind on this on the way home.

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      The last few insights given in the novel are from Ekym himself. He mentions a woman called Keela in the past tense, and tells Luapp that Enegene is possibly the one to replace her. He also says that Luapp's father is "power absoloute" , while not explaining what that means. However, Luapp does say that if his father objected to Enegene it would make his life difficult. It is only at the very end as he returns to space duty is there an insight into his more relaxed side.

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While her parents raised her to be honest and hardworking, Enegene couldn't entireness escape her environment or her peers. By the age of ten she is into petty pilfering but tries hard to please her parents. However, she doesn't get into real crime until she is in her early twenties. An older man she respects in the Swamplands asks her to help him by staying with a consignment of goods until they are collected by his customer. While she and some other young Swamplanders wait the guardians  raid the warehouse. 

      The group scatter and while the guardian cluster round up the others, Engine is cornered by the grey sub commander, Luapp Nostowe. She pulls a knife on him but is quickly disarmed and arrested. They are taken to Guardian Headquartes where Enegene is interviewed for several hours, but she refuses to name the person who involved her.

      Despite being told by her law speaker (lawyer) that she would only get a suspended sentence for a first offence, she was actually given the maximum sentence of six months, and she blamed the guardian for that.

      Unbeknown to the general public, guardians have a policy of rehabilitating first offenders when they think it possible. Luapp defies that Enegene has a chance of a normal life. He visits her every fortnight for the entire six months encouraging her to take up some of the courses on offer to turn her life around. For the first two months all he gets are sullen insolent remarks and sometimes a vocally abusive reaction, but by the third month she begins to consider his advice. She enrolee in a course to improve her language, literature and numerical skills, then she does a course in business studies. As her last month is drawing to a close, Luapp tells her she can use his name as a recommendation to get a place to live and work. 

      She manages to get a small flat in the poorer end of Mohaib city, and has a series of low paid jobs. After a few a year she decides she doesn't like working for someone else, and asks Luapp to recommend a an occupation she can do for herself. He tells her to become a Syrian as it utilises all her natural talents;

quick wits, an ability to defend herself and an unhealthy interest in everyone else's business. She looks it up and decides that she likes the idea. With Luapp's help she rents an office and starts life as a one person investigator.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 During this time Luapp asked her to help him on a case he had been assigned; to identify and stop a serial killer who had left a trail of bodies across the galaxy. He went ahead in the disguise of a slave to the planet Pedanta, and she went some months later as a wealthy heiress. She was determined to use this event to her advantage.

      On the way to Pedanta, she was tutored in how to act as one of the super rich by Luapp's friend Ekym Yetok who himself was from a wealthy family, and was able to convinced all she knew on the planet of her pedigree. She managed to "buy" Luapp as a guard slave in line with the plan and then they worked together to unmask the killer. During the mission, Enegene began to change her view of guardians in general and Luapp Nostowe in particular. When he was "killed" by the serial killer she was amazed at how upset she was.

     The mission was a success and the returned to Gaeiza. A couple of months later they had to go to Padua, the Galactic Council planet to hear the pronouncement on the killer, who was caught and killed on the planet Freair. While on Padua, Luapp realises that he is attracted to Enegene and when they return to Gaeiza, they continue to see each other.

      As time passes, Enegene becomes well known and respected as a Spyrian. Her business grows and by the time of the next adventure, she has a business suite and employs two other spyrians and three recorders (secretaries).

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